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Teen Poetry #9

So here i am again

I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

0 posted 2009-10-27 06:57 PM

So here i am again,
falling away from the world
Somewhere i've always been
Upset over another girl

Grief never fails
The world never ends, (or so they say!)
As my skin turns pale
and the truth continues to bend

If this turns out to be the end
Wrap my shattered heart and give it a send

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

1 posted 2009-10-27 09:56 PM

i love this, its short and..."not-so-sweet" (if you know what i mean).
the rhyming and the length was just perfect.
library.

julianna

everyone's normal [until you get to know them]

I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

2 posted 2009-10-27 10:04 PM

its a sonnet, i learned about them in english class and with current events. it just came...

I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

3 posted 2009-10-27 10:05 PM

wait no no its not. wrong thing!

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

4 posted 2009-10-28 03:16 AM

YOUR BACK.. Oh how i love u..
YOU CAN SOO WRITE!!.
xx

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

5 posted 2009-10-28 04:38 PM

Hey dude
Its been awhile since you've last post. Glad to see ya back.

Nice write btw

-Zach

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

6 posted 2009-10-30 11:44 PM

Beautiful write

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