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Surrender
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Surrender |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
Surrender Addition submission a beauty so obscene Attraction distraction frenetically serene Collision division chaotic past elite Fictional conviction while swaying inside the beat Elation frustration barriers thin and strong Devotion a notion devoid of right or wrong Connection recollection with the smell of cigarettes Inflection tension plays like Russian roulette Friction addiction climax in disguise Emission submission in choosing her demise. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
WOAH THIS WAS GREAT Krysti |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
Short and powerful. (Lol, sounds like I'm describing myself...) Anyway, well done! Loved how you included not just one rhyme per pair of sentences, but two! Library! There is power in the pen. |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
Assassin- Thankyou!!  (I also am short and powerful, and enjoy it immensely.) |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
wow! fantastic |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
priyanka-- Muchas Gracias! |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
How do you manage to write such a wonderful piece! I'm reading it back all over again and I'm awestruck!Again! |
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