priyanka
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since 2009-06-15
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2009-06-18
07:53 AM
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I'll tell you again there is nothing wrong
but if you look into my eyes-you would know I was trying to be strong
I say I've got over, I say I'm all done
But let me tell you it has just begun
Never did it start but it was always there
Before I could realise, i could no longer bear
The pain to lose you
I wondered if it could ever be true?
I fell in a trap
Even though i always said it was all crap
It's all around me
It's all inside me
I can never forget it all
Even if I tried real hard
The time I spent with you-
Its become a part of me
Best said is when it remains unsaid
But why have you ruined my life?
It's just a baby-things had just begun
You made me dream of a life with you like a song written never to be sung.
When I say baby I mean my life...I had just started living
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precious pearls
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since 2009-07-24
Posts 110
NJ; United States
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2009-09-27
06:53 PM
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Wow!!! It was beautiful! It really expressed ur feelings and everything! Great poem, made me wanna cry for you.....Always,
Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)
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priyanka
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2009-10-04
04:56 PM
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thank you again!
its really nice of you to comment...
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Penwing
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since 2009-07-27
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Waverly, MN
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2009-10-05
11:51 PM
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Wow.....First you are a great writer....but i almost cried while reading this because you basicy described what i am going through with my girlfriend right now....i left her...and realized that i could not do without her and she gracefully gave me another chance
sorry for the rant,
great write,
,Alex
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priyanka
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2009-10-06
11:04 AM
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I'm glad it worked out for you...
And thank you for the compliments...
Hearing it from such great writers is icing on the cake...
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hafrock
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 34
India
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2009-10-10
03:52 PM
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Reminds me of the terrible times my roommate is going through..its though as if he's tellin me his woes..gr8 piece of a writing.k.i.u
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priyanka
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2009-10-10
04:32 PM
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Thank you hafrock,
Hope you're room mate's doing fine...
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priyanka
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2009-10-10
05:03 PM
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priyanka
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2011-10-03
06:38 PM
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