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Ravagence
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since 2009-08-16
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0 posted 2009-09-28 07:56 PM


I have many friends:
The nice ones-
The close ones-
The ones that stick up for you.

But I have one that I feel is so
important that i must write this.
She is one I can talk to like a
Human.

Not some programmed cussing machine,
or some awkward guy.
She let's me say what I feel
And listens.

Not criticizing.
Just listening.
Not eager for me to Shut up.
But eager for me to continue.

When I stop,
She stops listening,
And doesn't say a word.
Just thinks for an answer.


Fact.
Most people think about the answer to a question before the question is finished being said. Therefore they do not receive the full meaning of the question.

Based on a real friend.

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