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Clockwork_Orange
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0 posted 2009-09-11 03:37 PM



im so tired that i can barely keep my eyes open
if this life then tell me where am i goin
its five a.m. and i cant sleep
i worked 34 hours alone this week

its only thursday and i feel a mess
im so run down man, i need a rest
i light a smoke to just calm my nerves
i inhale even though it hurts

my phone goes off
the foo fighters again
"you know my hero
leaping off of beds"
but shut it off
and turn off my phone
im so fed up
i need to be alone

the end of the rope
is just inches away
im about to let go
because im ready to break

and 19 is looking pretty old
when they assign you a cell for you to own
but time passes and things move on
you cant hesitate on what youve done wrong

ill brave the storm
ill get back home
and maybe someday i will

be ordinary
  

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Clockwork_Orange
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1 posted 2009-09-11 03:39 PM


for those of you who know this song.... i thought it would be cool to end it it like my hero lol. and yes...i know he doesnt really say leaping off of beds, but thats what i always thought it was before i learned it on my six string.
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2 posted 2009-09-11 04:47 PM


very nice
Krysti

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3 posted 2009-09-15 06:31 AM


Argh what a great tribute to such and awesome band.. loved every minute...

ROCK ON FOO FIGHTERS

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