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Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk Junior Member
since 2009-05-03
Posts 31Terrell,Texas |
When I was a child- I saw in black and white- everything was obvious- Either right or wrong- No arguments,no pros and cons. Choices were precise- Pure and joyous clarity- Gave me a simple life- So I grew and learned to face the world- Living life that way. And now I feel unprepared- 'Cause black and white turned gray- My unfaltering vision failed- Focus failed my eyes- Where choices were obvious. I can't tell wrong from right- Because today I am a teenager- And nothings quite so clean- I'm seeing through an adult's eyes- A child's worst fear. |
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Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia |
ahh sometimes i wish i could go back to when things appeared in black and white, how much more simpler life seemed. Loved the poem. Lee. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I like this poem. It flows really well and reminds of how it was as a teenager. I liked the black and white of childhood - and those teenage limbo years threw me for a real loop. Good writing. Alison |
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heartofsteel Junior Member
since 2009-09-07
Posts 13Oregon, USA |
it was an okay poem seemed very simple though. I, personally, like more complex vocab. Good job. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
very nice poem. i remember thinking in childhood how easy it was. the older you get you will also realize being a teenager is quite easy as well. keep sharing  Krysti |
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Ingrediants New Member
since 2009-09-13
Posts 8 |
I liked your poem, it has all the right words, but when i read it i don't feel the flow of the words. But that's just me. |
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