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Teen Poetry #9

untitled and unfinished

Love_Skull
Junior Member

since 2008-07-15

Posts 44

0 posted 2009-09-01 05:45 PM

Why do i remember
When all i want is to forget?
Why do i laugh
When all i want to do is cry?

Why do people act like they know me
When they are the ones who know the least?
Why do people call me different
When they just dont understand me?

Why do i hide
When i shouldnt be alone?
Why do i love
When all i do is get a broken heart?

Why do people talk
When all they should do is listen?
Why do people act like nothings wrong
When any second there life could change?

Why do i put a smile on my face
When i just want to run away from life?
Why do i act like nothing is wrong
When my life is crumbling to pieces?

Why does everything happen for a reason?
When that reason alters your life
Why does life have to end?
When a life is just beginning?

*not finished i just cant think of anything else right now*

By Leah Stonis

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2009-09-10 08:40 PM

i like this Leah. shares your thoughts very well
Krysti

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

2 posted 2009-10-05 02:50 AM

I think most of the poem was a rant on how things are in your life.

HOWEVER: I think you really started to write as you inked down that last stanza! ARGH! I want to tear out my hear 'cause I want to know what you would've written!!! It really bugs me that you ended when it seemed like you were starting something incredibly obvious, yet special.

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!

There is power in the pen.

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