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Writ_Upon_Emotion
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since 2009-08-26
Posts 13
Manchester, England

0 posted 2009-08-26 03:41 PM



No Direction -

Stuck at a crossroads
Fuel tank full
Mileage is 20
But my car won't drive
Traffic is heavy
Lost site of my friends
How i wish i could fly

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Ravagence
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since 2009-08-16
Posts 79

1 posted 2009-09-21 03:59 PM


Reminds me of the song "Float On" by Modest Mouse. I've felt that feeling where it's like your tethered to the ground, but your like a helium filled balloon and you want to fly away.
I really like short poems like this, It made my day.

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