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freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
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0 posted 2009-09-11 01:51 PM



Night time,
Is where my future feeds on my fantasies.
A haven where I live among my dreams.
I prosper in this peace.
My dread dissolves
And all the vivid details of vanity, vanishes,
Leaving only a lull of beauty.

This night time
Is my time,
To live, to live, to liveā€¦

And be beautiful, without the masks
That lay upon our skins.

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

© Copyright 2009 Christine Juarez - All Rights Reserved
Ravagence
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since 2009-08-16
Posts 79

1 posted 2009-09-21 03:56 PM


That sums my feelings up, I love the night. Is it the still or is it the relaxing sounds that comfort us at night, I wish my world was thrown upside down so we could live during dark. But then I'd think we'd ruin the night. So I think we should just keep it quiet about how amazing and serene night can be.
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