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freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
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0 posted 2009-09-11 01:51 PM



Night time,
Is where my future feeds on my fantasies.
A haven where I live among my dreams.
I prosper in this peace.
My dread dissolves
And all the vivid details of vanity, vanishes,
Leaving only a lull of beauty.

This night time
Is my time,
To live, to live, to live…

And be beautiful, without the masks
That lay upon our skins.

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

© Copyright 2009 Christine Juarez - All Rights Reserved
Ravagence
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since 2009-08-16
Posts 79

1 posted 2009-09-21 03:56 PM


That sums my feelings up, I love the night. Is it the still or is it the relaxing sounds that comfort us at night, I wish my world was thrown upside down so we could live during dark. But then I'd think we'd ruin the night. So I think we should just keep it quiet about how amazing and serene night can be.
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