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Heartache |
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precious pearls Member
since 2009-07-24
Posts 110NJ; United States |
Heartache Salty tears of anguish ran down her red, blotchy cheeks The empty hollow space in her heart never stopped hurting As her mind kept shaking with misery and despair Her whole body felt like it didn’t want to go on As her heartache never stopped... The birds that sang their cheerful songs They made it feel like she was in a world where she didn’t belong The clear blue, serene sky Was the perfect reminder that life would go on without her That he would go on without her The cascading tears never stopped As he left her standing all alone (Note this does not have anything to do with me... I just wrote it for someone in a chatroom... lol... hope you like it) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"The birds that sang their cheerful songs They made it feel like she was in a world where she didn’t belong The clear blue, serene sky Was the perfect reminder that life would go on without her" Many feel this way at some point in their lives~~~ expressed nicely for your friend. M |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
"They made it feel like she was in a world where she didn’t belong" Exactly how I feel sometimes. Great write  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yep, I do. A |
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