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Teen Poetry #9
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This is Tamma
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0 posted 2009-08-02 12:25 PM


I wear a lightening bolt,
Around my neck.
To keep it close,
To my heart.
It gives me the strength,
To make it thru another day.
And reminds me
To never give up hope.
© Copyright 2009 Tamma M. Offenstein - All Rights Reserved
crosscountry83
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1 posted 2009-08-03 02:08 PM

Good poem, I like the symbolism!  Welcome to pip!

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2 posted 2009-09-03 09:26 PM

I like this too.  It's simple and strong.

Alison
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