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Violence |
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Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk Junior Member
since 2009-05-03
Posts 31Terrell,Texas |
All over the world- Each day and night- Violence is happening- With all it's might. People hurt people- Without a care- It's just not right- It's just not fair. Solving problems- In a violent way- Creates more problems- That are sure to stay. We all need to talk- We don't need to fight- Knives and guns- Are just not right. To stop the violence- You need to stay cool- Don't lose your temper- Don't act like a fool. If we all work together- To make it cease- We'll have no more violence- We'll just have peace. |
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precious pearls Member
since 2009-07-24
Posts 110NJ; United States |
I loved the message... if only people would listen... alas, that is not the way of the world. But the rhyming, pacing, and message were all great! Keep it up!!!  Always, |
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