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A Beautiful and Unique Individual
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A Beautiful and Unique Individual |
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precious pearls Member
since 2009-07-24
Posts 110NJ; United States |
A Beautiful and Unique Individual When you are strong And you know how to speak I say you belong And that you are unique If you are beautiful On the inside And you provide Girl, you sparkle! Because you were meant to shine! When you are your own best friend And you still have it together I say you are a fighter And I have to commend You, my sister Because you are like no other! I could stand here and lie And say that you’re a housefly But you are so much more And I’m sure That you will go far! Because you are a star! You’re a real woman A phenomenal one rather. Your face shines golden! And you’re worth so much more for any bachelor! You’re a true winner! You should demand respect Nobody should treat you wrong! You should expect Something from others And be strong! You are unique An individual, if you will A gorgeous antique! Who knows her skill! We are all beautiful In our own special way. We are the very symbol Of the most elegant bouquet! Always, |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
This is my favorite of you by far. Great write. And it was consistent. which is a plus in my book. Hahaha.  -Zach |
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arabesque Junior Member
since 2009-07-26
Posts 14USA |
I definitely have to agree with Falling Rain- this is my fave by you. There's just something about rhyming poetry that speaks to me...anyway, this was amazing. I especially liked the line about being your own best friend and still having it together. Excellent write Forever, |
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precious pearls Member
since 2009-07-24
Posts 110NJ; United States |
Thanks guys... I actually wrote this for a school play... lol! But I really appreciate the comments, it means a lot because I hoped it would let other girls see that they are truly "a beautiful and unique individual"! Thanks again for the comments... Yours, Kai |
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