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UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

0 posted 2009-08-13 01:31 AM

I know
that we both said goodbye.
But I miss him.

I know
that we said it was best.
But I want him.

I know
that it would never work.
But I need.

I know
that we're too far apart.
But that doesn't stop me
from needing his laughter.

I know
that my parents would never accept him.
But that doesn't stop me
from wanting to see his brown eyes.

I know
that I don't deserve someone like him.
But that doesn't stop me
from missing his warmth.

I know
that he's miles away from me.
But that doesn't stop me
from pretending he's here
and that all's well.

That he still loves sme.

But I miss him.

[This message has been edited by UNTAMEDelegance (08-13-2009 09:28 PM).]

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2009-08-13 03:35 PM

Awe! I think everyone might know how this feels like. And if not, your poem sure does explain it nicely. Good job!

-Zach

crosscountry83
Member

since 2009-07-30

Posts 345

2 posted 2009-08-13 05:20 PM

Wonderfully written. I think that in the fourth stanza, "to" should be "too" though.

Rileigh

ninjawild
Junior Member

since 2009-08-11

Posts 33
u.s. army

3 posted 2009-08-13 06:42 PM

have you let him know this? is it too impossible to not be with him?..

UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

4 posted 2009-08-13 09:26 PM

I wish I could tell him but I don't want to... how to say this? Push him when he doesn't want to be pushed. I think that that could ruin our friendship. It really would be very difficult for us to be together. He's gone away to boot camp for the marines and I still have my junior and senior years of high school to complete. And as stated in the poem, my parents would never accept him. He's of a different religion and doesn't act like the perfect little angels my parents expect me to date. But I am still writing him letters and we're still very, very good friends. So it's not as bad as it could be.=^.^=
~UNTAMEDelegance

UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

5 posted 2009-08-13 09:28 PM

Thank you crosscountry83. I didn't catch that earlier. =^.^=

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