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Teen Poetry #9

Fighting fate

nehematala
Member

since 2009-05-21

Posts 129

0 posted 2009-08-09 10:03 PM

He's sitting outside my window
Wondering what it will take
He's tried so many times already
But I won't come

I keep fighting him
I know there is more to my life
But I feel his presence everyday
He just won't go

This feeling of pure cold hatred
He's already taken so many I love
And now he's waiting
He wants me

I proved over and over
It won't be easy
But he keeps coming back
With lame attempts on me

Fighting this fate
I know he will eventually win
But I can't give in
Deaths waiting for me

The number one thing in acting is honesty: If you can fake that you've got it made.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2009-08-16 01:46 AM

wow, I really like this. Great write, I'm surprised nobody else has said anything.

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UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

2 posted 2009-08-19 12:52 PM

This is really good, michi! at first i was confues and thought it was about a certain someone that we don't like, but then i realized that it wasn't. It's hard to fight fate isn't it. ~UNTAMEDelegance

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