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Talh1n0vl3v1tat10n New Member
since 2009-07-28
Posts 6 |
This is the beginning The question is a problem a solution A Questions as a solution A solution as the answer to the problem The solution a problem the solution a problem Can you see through these trees? This is a facade Can you see that? Theres no way around what we have become Theres no way around the future Change is Change Just Change no results no happiness no pain change is change I never thought id see your face I never thought you'd come I gave you all the signals I gave you everything I had And you returned the smile You returned the smile This isnt it This isnt the end Deeply colored water marks stretch the horizon Upon dimly lit canyon hights we stand Watching the sunset fade upon the skyline As we stand upon the sky and look up at the ground Forever is Forever Forever is Today 742617000027 |
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crimsonXnails Member
since 2008-02-10
Posts 108dark/little/heavan.:*:. |
the first stanza literally made me laugh! ur brilliance continues to astound me, i can't believe how friggin sweet this stuff is X) i don't know if you know, but you can use html (!) to put in blank lines and what not. this poem just seemed to be missing ur style... i like how you break it up! if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying |
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Talh1n0vl3v1tat10n New Member
since 2009-07-28
Posts 6 |
i would break it up but i have no idea how to use html im stuck on it |
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crimsonXnails Member
since 2008-02-10
Posts 108dark/little/heavan.:*:. |
you can also just press enter. like that. it works too! if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying |
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