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Teen Poetry #9

One Silent September

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2009-08-02 10:28 PM

~for one of my best friends.
One silent September,
the snow began to fall.
Chilling the air,
freezing time.

Standing in the meadow,
tears begin to drop.
Letting the world know,
opening blinded eyes.

Now the sorrow has been remembered,
the flowers can start to wilt.
People will walk away,
living their lives in memories.
And forgetting the one you tried to create.
{~~*~~}

Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
{~~*~~}

crosscountry83
Member

since 2009-07-30

Posts 345

1 posted 2009-08-03 12:49 PM

Wow, wonderful write. Sounded deep and melancholy, kind of more sad than melancholy. You had great imagery and a fluid tone, keep it up.

Rileigh

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2009-08-03 12:40 PM

Aww Emily!! I haven't talked to you in forever. How's everything going?

Ths poem is really good. I'm putting it in my library.

Hope things are well,

-Zach

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

3 posted 2009-08-04 07:00 AM

No one's memory is ever forgotten as long as some tender mark is left on the world.

A soul is in the speech and tears of those who love us.

Love and hugs, Luke.

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

4 posted 2009-08-05 01:00 AM

absolutely loved it!

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

5 posted 2009-08-06 02:37 PM

Thank you all for reading.

{~~*~~}

Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
{~~*~~}

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

6 posted 2009-08-09 12:52 PM

you're welcome

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

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