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the night i died twice
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the night i died twice |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN 
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i am my own worst enemy i swear im my own downfall everyone knows but they'll never say the words wont come at all sticks and stones can break your bones yes, they really can but what happens to your soul when you really get out of hand today i thought i was going to die in a bathroom of all places wishing to God before i go please just help me make it no more, no more i scream at them but the voices never stop i cant control what ive done this was never the plot im a waste of human tissue im a failure at this life ive done nothing but mess up in my 18 years of life and this is not a plea for help i know im already gone lying on this bathroom floor i cant hold on for long ~ you cant run from yourself ~ |
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crosscountry83 Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 345 |
Wow, this was really deep. It's hard for me to relate, maybe that's a good thing... but your poem gives me understanding. Keep writing poetry, it's really good! |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Loved it.. More than you could ever possibly imagine.. keep your head up hunni.. mwahsssss xxx |
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