Teen Poetry #9 |
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the_inner_me11 Junior Member
since 2009-05-12
Posts 15 |
So I dont know how I feel about this one. Tell me what you think, please and thanks. =) I look at you and my mind begins to wander. I begin to think of us, You and me, Our history. I think of the love and the hurt, The good and the bad. All we've been through, And what's awaiting. I think of how long this'll last, Our time together I mean. Til I have to make my departure, Our last time together only a dream. I think of how my heart will cry, When I leave from by your side. But then I think how it's worth it. Being able to see the one I love, The one I care most about, The one that means the world to me. |
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crosscountry83 Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 345 |
I like it, the poem flows nicely. I also like that it's a little vague, it gives it charm. Anyone can read it and relate to it good job! I'm having a hard time getting people to comment for me... If you have time to comment maybe... |
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