Teen Poetry #9 |
Maybe Madison |
Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
today i think i just lost everything all we've said and thought and dreamed and made and through the hallway i still see you there past the shadows and the empty air any second you will walk right in and i can plead that i was wrong agian if it still keeps you here id steal a car and we could drive away to the hills and stars and maybe madison has the answers but theres no telling if we never go so pack your bags the time is getting late the stations getting smaller as we head out of state lets see the mountains or the rivers deep lets pitch a tent but never sleep let the fire burn out to only embers and we can watch it burn to cinders maybe madison has the answers but we'll never know if we never go ~ you cant run from yourself ~ [This message has been edited by Clockwork_Orange (07-30-2009 02:17 PM).] |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Great work, like usual. I liked the second stanza best. -Zach |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
I thought this was great, and the second stanza is the best. The hardest part about writing poetry, |
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