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Romanticy
New Member
since 2009-07-28
Posts 3
Florida, US

0 posted 2009-07-28 06:54 PM


Your not just the ordinary girl next door,
You seem like your much more.

You say your a model simply amaizing,
Like a fire your body is simply blazing.

Your beauty is something special,
Its something on another level.

It gives me that little shine in my eyes,
Just like the sun rise.

If you ask me ill tell you unlike the other guys,
That im not asshamed to say that you give me butterflies.

I can picture us laying down looking up at the blue skys,
As the time flies by.

And as day turns to night,
The stars shine so bright.

It couldnt feel more right, as I look over to you and you look at me,

Its exactly how I want it to be...

.:Romanticy:.

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arabesque
Junior Member
since 2009-07-26
Posts 14
USA
1 posted 2009-07-28 09:00 PM


Aww that's so cute   Very nice and sweet.

Forever,
Arabesque<3

freeand2sexy
Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
2 posted 2009-07-30 02:02 PM


Welcome to Pip!!!

I like your first post.

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

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