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something meaningful
Junior Member
since 2009-07-17
Posts 12
Wisconsin, USA

0 posted 2009-07-24 03:33 PM



broken up
broken down
even God seems to cry

this never-ending pain
has cause a
constant cloud in the sky

and you and me are
standing beneath that cloud
hoping its all a nightmare

seeing our faces in
that terrible cloud above
we can't help but stare

we wonder how things can go
from good to bad in
such a short period of time

our laughing memories turned
into a crying existance
must be a heartless crime

the only sweet part of
this bittersweet moment
is that we are together

under that cloud and
in our hearts we'll
be inseparable forever

© Copyright 2009 Amanda Lussier - All Rights Reserved
freeand2sexy
Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
1 posted 2009-07-24 08:22 PM


I enjoyed reading this. It flowed nicely!

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

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