Teen Poetry #9 |
our cloud |
something meaningful Junior Member
since 2009-07-17
Posts 12Wisconsin, USA |
broken up broken down even God seems to cry this never-ending pain has cause a constant cloud in the sky and you and me are standing beneath that cloud hoping its all a nightmare seeing our faces in that terrible cloud above we can't help but stare we wonder how things can go from good to bad in such a short period of time our laughing memories turned into a crying existance must be a heartless crime the only sweet part of this bittersweet moment is that we are together under that cloud and in our hearts we'll be inseparable forever |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
I enjoyed reading this. It flowed nicely! The hardest part about writing poetry, is trying not to write like everyone else. |
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