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Teen Poetry #9

Just to let you know

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

0 posted 2009-01-12 08:13 PM

I'm going off
To see
The world

There is
No need
To worry

I'll be
Safe
And sound

Be back
In a
While

There's no need
For me
To hurry

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

Marc-Andre
Senior Member

since 2008-12-07

Posts 501

1 posted 2009-01-12 09:35 PM

Enjoy the world, keep in touch and keep posting

Well-penned. Mark

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2009-01-12 10:14 PM

Short, sweet and to the point. Keep up the good work!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

3 posted 2009-01-13 01:14 AM

So casual and worry-free. Sounds like a note left for an over-protective parent.
Good job!

There is power in the pen.

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

4 posted 2009-01-13 07:19 PM

Thanks, i actually wrote it as a note to someone than seperated the sentences into short lines.

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

5 posted 2009-01-14 04:52 PM

very unique, i like it! keep it up
!tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

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