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Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

0 posted 2009-01-12 04:45 AM

What if? What if you were a thirteen year old living in this hell? This is a poor imitation of a cry for help.

Not alone,
You promised me I never be alone!
Here I am! And where are you?
You said you loved me!

You said you loved me...
now all you do is use me!
Is that all I am too you?
A toy? A thing of amusement!

I made you laugh, you smile,
Those feelings of pure joy,
Now I'm trapped in the darkness,
So far away.

Pain.... Sorrow humiliation,
Where did all my happiness go?
Standing in you arms,
The world was washed in colour.

Now its bleak and gray,
Locked behind these walls,
I feel so betrayed,
I'm afraid.

I use to long for your touch,
Now I cant stand it,
Don't touch me, don't hurt me,
I will give you what you want.

Go AWAY!

You take what you want from my body,
From my flesh, and mind,
Locked here I'm your prisoner,
Raped for your delight.

I give you what your body wants,
What it craves,
You take with you my innocence,
And all you leave me with is shame.

You said you loved me...
Now all you do is hurt me,
I hear the foot steps down the hall,
Don't come in here... Daddy.

For the people that this happened to, I'm so sorry, I cant change it, and take away your pain.

Words have power, Im going to unleash the power of my soul.

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

1 posted 2009-01-12 05:21 AM

Okay, i have to say it, my poems now suck, so people bare with me, Im going back to the begining, And this one is fake.

Words have power, Im going to unleash the power of my soul.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2009-01-12 04:43 PM

NO they dont!!! I love them!!1 and this was amazing i love it!!!!! <3 love you hunni
Krysti

wwzwlmd8
Member

since 2006-09-23

Posts 96
San Diego,CA

3 posted 2009-01-12 05:22 PM

THEY R REALLY GREAT

~Indya

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

4 posted 2009-01-13 01:11 AM

Maybe it wasn't ur best in terms of flow...But it wasn't a poor imitation at all. It was an honest expression of ur thoughts and feelings on the particular topic. That's how a poem should be written.

Great job!

There is power in the pen.

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

5 posted 2009-01-14 04:57 PM

the ending was gut wrenching, it brought tears to my eyes. very good, very full of emotion... made me shiver.
!tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

6 posted 2009-01-14 07:45 PM

Aww, This is why this is the best poetry site. Thank you. and i will do my best, And hopefully be able to do a health mix of poems.

Words have power, Im going to unleash the power of my soul.

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