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young_blood
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0 posted 2009-01-12 10:06 AM


(Untitled) 1/12/2009

There were times when
living
with ghosts made me feel younger,
but lately I've felt gravely aged.

© Copyright 2009 Alex Lewis - All Rights Reserved
Earl Robertson
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1 posted 2009-01-12 06:02 PM


HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Great stuff!

My melancholy is purely my own

young_blood
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2 posted 2009-01-12 07:55 PM


Earl, are you laughing at the irony?
Assassin_of_Verse
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3 posted 2009-01-13 12:53 PM


Puahahaha, this is great stuff! But I can't help but feel there's some deep, hidden meaning WAY underneath the irony...Paranoia?

There is power in the pen.

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4 posted 2009-01-13 08:46 AM


Haha, Ironic indeed.. I sorta understand the meaning here. But explaining always helps.

-Zach  

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

XxForever.BrokenxX
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5 posted 2009-01-13 04:50 PM


Well said young_blood, well said. I think i know what ur saying..

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Emmalee Janelle
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young_blood
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6 posted 2009-01-13 09:29 PM


Very simply put: Hanging onto old memories may make you feel young, but in the end, they only drag you down. Thanks for reading everyone!
Earl Robertson
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7 posted 2009-01-13 11:58 PM


Yes yes I was laughing at the irony! I mean it was FUNNY! I'm not always in the mood to desect things you know...(and your stuff takes so much TIME...)

My melancholy is purely my own

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