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The Ineviatble Hierachy (OLD!!!)
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
*Not my best. It was kind of forced out* The Inevitable Hierarchy A four-part poem Anarchy of the Soul (Part 1) Get down on the ground, Can¡¯t you hear that sound? It¡¯s the rage of an angry soul. Down with the standards; out with the rules. Shut down all systems! Forego all fools! Feel for the whole, Do you hear that toll? It¡¯s the song of an empty soul. A missed chord. Too much Dischord. A broken melody. Put down the distractions, enough with the factions, And end to anarchy of the soul. Monarchy of the Mind (Part 2) Anarchy resembles freedom¡¦ But only instigates instability. You won¡¯t have need of any other. ¡®Cause I¡¯ll give you my all. So give me all of you, and let me enthrall. Invest in me (Leave all else behind). Why not embrace The monarchy of my mind? A Democratic Heart (Part 3) One¡¯s heart will never be a democracy. Reason? A heart has priorities. A hierarchy. Hierarchy of the heart So what does a heart need the most? Simple: Love Love tames anarchy and humbles monarchy. But tread softly, ¡®Cause a broken heart is the hardest to rebuild. 9/6/08 |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
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I have to admit I was unsure about this until I read the very end. Once I read that, everything sort of fell into place. I enjoy reading your writing, keep it up! ---Cierra |
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