Falling rain
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since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois
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2009-01-09
06:51 PM
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Sitting at the corner of Failure St. and Misery Ave.I'm starting to think this is just a repeat Like I've been played like this before. The shame, the guilt. Misery loves its company Holding me closer then ever more. Woven in the cloth of lies Letting it cover my eyes to be deceived Coughing up blood and a heart So hard for me to believe That I was trapped in your arms Constricted by my shame Barely loving myself Now I'm the one to blame. Drowning in the shadows Consumed within my self hate You enticed me with your voice Stupid me took the bait. Now I'm lying on the floor Soundlessly calling you to help me My heart stopped beating and its cold.. Don't walk away.. please....
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Zach Booker-Scott
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XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
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posted
2009-01-09
06:57 PM
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...That, was the best most understandable poem i have read in the longest time. This is going in my library. Amazing job, i applaud you.
{~~*~~}Miss.Emmalee
"Who the **** are you?!!?.. GET AWAY FROM MY LIMO!!"
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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08
Posts 422
Canada
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2009-01-09
07:06 PM
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OMG!!! that was incredible!!! i can totally relate to this, extremely well writen, i love it. library a million times!!!.:~]Julianna[~:.
waiting for you to notice me, touch me, hear me, love me...ask me for something other than gum.
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GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16
Posts 471
TN
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2009-01-27
10:25 PM
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Ooooh, this reminds me of the way I have treated many guys in the past.... This could put the guilt on most girls who have done the same thing. Very well written.
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