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Teen Poetry #9
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Rosie_Orange
Junior Member
since 2009-04-20
Posts 46
South Africa
0 posted 2009-05-06 01:58 PM

Black and white soldiers,
a marching pulse.
One step, two step,
Unlock beating keys.
Courage in their stance,
Arrogance assumes.
While ballerinas flock and sway,
their feet fall softly, swiftly
A choppy tune.
Melody and harmonies.
Ten fingers,
play an act.
Victory and triumph.
Pompous parades,
smiles and waves...

or
defeat, downfall,
a slow death march.


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Octave
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since 2008-07-29
Posts 186
Highlands, Scotland.
1 posted 2009-05-07 03:32 PM

This made me smile. It has a very springy, bouncy feel to it. I dont know much about non-rhyming poetry, so cant really crit, but i really liked this.
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