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nina1522 Member
since 2009-02-14
Posts 189 |
strangers tell me to close the lid to lock my emotions to hide the key to bury them beneath deluded soil beneath the mud beneath unstable ground beneath the eyes of others full of foriegn thoughts the box sits and waits waiting for blithe feelings waiting for the acceptance cold chipped cracked bleeding the box waits :] turtle |
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moonbeam
since 2005-12-24
Posts 2356 |
This is the best poem I've seen from you nina, possibly the best by far. Whatever you're doing, keep doing it.  |
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Rosie_Orange Junior Member
since 2009-04-20
Posts 46South Africa |
I love it! its almost like a metaphor... burying your emotions... brilliant (: |
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JenniferMaxwell
since 2006-09-14
Posts 2423 |
Really nice work on this one, Nina! |
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turtle Senior Member
since 2009-01-23
Posts 548Harbor |
Nina, I just have to say that even I am impressed with this poem. The metaphorical implications of "box" verges on profound. This coming from a 15 year old girl that hasn't even written a dozen poems almost boggles the mind. |
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nina1522 Member
since 2009-02-14
Posts 189 |
haha no way!! this was my easiest poem. it didnt take me long i just wrote it. haha thanks everyone. wow moonbeam thank you. i really repsect that you think its the best one, you ussually critique poems and i was stunned to see you thought mine was good. thank you |
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