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gdcod2player Member
since 2008-07-26
Posts 117 |
What is life? The beauty of what you get in the end What if I can’t get her back? I want to be a big star player But that won’t bring you back Is there nothing that can help me now? Tell me what do I live for? Tell me if I can have that crutch The failing of this town It’s only in my mind here I thought you felt the same way But that was just to please My simple mind Can I call you Alison? Or is that just a name that I haven’t understood You’re unique Sometimes I thought you were the only one I hope I feel the same way When I see you again Will that day come? When will I see you alone? I want to speak the words on my mind Those words won’t be forgotten They won’t be gone Time is changing me I’m sure it’s played with you too |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Your style isn't my favorite type of writing but your still good using words in writing. Keep trying on it and I'm sure you'll get something pretty great. -Zach When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you. |
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