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crimsonXnails
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since 2008-02-10
Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

0 posted 2009-01-08 03:01 PM


crashing pulse,
sweaty palms,
colliding.
your heart beat
in my hand
my breath
in your lungs,
you took it
away.
gasping
i need you
faster
i love you
your hair,
your smile,
your skin.
you love me
almost as much
as you loved
the 50 dollars
in my hand.
you're gone
and im
still here.

© Copyright 2009 Tracey - All Rights Reserved
freeand2sexy
Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
1 posted 2009-01-08 07:08 PM


Nicely written! i really enjoyed reading it , can't wait to read more!

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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