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freeand2sexy
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0 posted 2009-03-13 06:13 PM



This just a freewrite I made myself write it in 3-5 minutes. Freewrites are fun especially if you have writer's block. My subject was What moves you?

What's moving me to move
And do what I please
To choose what I choose
Then let it fall with ease
What moves me now
What moved me then
What makes me hide
And then pretend
What makes me cry
The tears of others
Or the hidden lies
Of their own mothers
What's moving me to move
And do what I must
To choose what I choose
And live in this lust


Um, being a freewrite I was just having fun with this, and wasn't trying to use meter or anything else so no critiques on my freewrites, yeah there're horrible but horribly fun, as well




No, I'm not conceited, 2sexy doesn't mean "too sexy", it means something else!

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isabella223
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since 2009-03-14
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1 posted 2009-03-14 08:19 PM


haha, what does mean? just out of curiosty
freeand2sexy
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2 posted 2009-03-14 08:24 PM


What does this freewrite mean?

Idk, whatever you want it to mean.

No, I'm not conceited, 2sexy doesn't mean "too sexy", it means something else!

isabella223
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3 posted 2009-03-14 08:31 PM


o no.. i mean the 2sexy? the free wrte was great
freeand2sexy
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4 posted 2009-03-14 08:35 PM


oh, haha, I'm a lil stupid today sry, it's the weekend you know. well if you really want to know, email me and I'll tell you, I rather not say here.

No, I'm not conceited, 2sexy doesn't mean "too sexy", it means something else!

GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16
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5 posted 2009-03-15 05:52 PM


Christine, tell me on myspace what 2sexy means lol

&& I think I like your "fun" lol

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