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Sixpence
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Sixpence |
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Octave Member
since 2008-07-29
Posts 186Highlands, Scotland. |
Sixpence I like crying in the rain Just so no one knows Emotions on a sixpence Swallowing the blows I just want to get lost Inside this far forever Lose every single memory Of us and our together My face inside my fingers Rocking on my heels I want to taste your happiness Just want to see how it feels Lying in the petty grass Face down to the sky Eating up the atmosphere I don’t even want to try Climb out your body And come dance with me Technicolour happiness Is everything I see Magic smile churning Take your hand in mine Glue a smile on your heart And just pretend you’re fine I like crying in the rain As I’m sitting on this shelf Waiting for my time to come It hides me from myself. Not very good, sorry. |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
I think this was very good. I did have to look up the word Sixpence, but learning a new word doesn't hurt anyone(though I doubt I'll ever use it.) Awesome write! No, I'm not conceited, 2sexy doesn't mean "too sexy", it means something else! |
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stacylynn418 Junior Member
since 2009-03-06
Posts 40new york |
i think this is really good. A lot of really good imagery, and very well written. good job :] |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Is sixpence your new word? lol It was in the last poem I read of yours too. Nice write. |
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Octave Member
since 2008-07-29
Posts 186Highlands, Scotland. |
Haha, yeah it has been popping up quite a lot lately. Thanks everyone who commented. |
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