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Teen Poetry #9

Happiest in Black

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2009-03-13 09:38 AM

It's five thirty in the morning
       Again
Time to get up for school
       Again
I go to my dresser and pick out a black shirt
       Again.

I love this color
It's my sheild
My safe place
No one looks, but to wonder
"Why does she always wear black?"

I don't mind so much.
They can say or think whatever they want.
As can I.
There are those who love me in black
Or blue or green or any other color
I have yet to find one that surpasses ebony, however

Those people wouldn't listen
Even if I could tell them
That I'm not really so horrible
Or depressed
I'm happiest
When i'm in black.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2009-03-13 01:00 PM

Ah I know that feeling. Nice write.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

2 posted 2009-03-13 07:39 PM

Uh, couldn't say I know that feeling, I'm more of a bright colors type of person, you know pink, light blue, yellow etc. but black is awesome too.

No, I'm not conceited, 2sexy doesn't mean "too sexy", it means something else!

[This message has been edited by freeand2sexy (03-14-2009 02:57 AM).]

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

3 posted 2009-03-15 05:32 PM

Ha! I definately know that feeling. Everyone thinks black is a depressed color. Pink is my depressed color. Black is a happy color. I liked the way you wrote this

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