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stacylynn418
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since 2009-03-06
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0 posted 2009-03-06 03:31 PM


I see them come and go.
I grow fond, then watch them leave.
I hold on to what I know,
Because its no longer enough to believe.

But I still have one thing, dear,
Because you’re still here;
Yeah, you’re still here.

The years have come and gone
And some took the best of me.
Seasons roll around
And I’m still stuck here when they leave.

But I still have one thing, dear,
Because you’re still here;
Yeah, you’re still here.

I’ve known people well
Who have turned and walked away.
Some things suddenly stop
That once happened every day.

But I still have one thing, dear,
Because you’re still here;
Yeah, you’re still here.

One thing remains constant;
You are everywhere I turn.
I’ve tried to give you up;
You’d think by now I would have learned.

And my life is still perfect, dear,
Because you’re still here;
You’re always here.

© Copyright 2009 stacy carter - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2009-03-06 03:54 PM


Stacy, this has the wonderful sound
of a song, so I hope you intend for
it to be so.

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GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16
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2 posted 2009-03-06 04:08 PM


Lol...Sunshine is right. As I was reading it I was going to ask you if it is a song, then I saw her post lol very pretty...
freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
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3 posted 2009-03-06 08:45 PM


I think this is awesome!

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

stacylynn418
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since 2009-03-06
Posts 40
new york
4 posted 2009-03-07 11:08 AM


thank you all :]
yeah, when i started i didnt have the intentions of making a song, but youre right, i think the repitition gives it that feel.

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