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kiwie15:D
Junior Member

since 2009-03-05

Posts 13
california

0 posted 2009-03-05 01:57 PM

confusing emotions running
through my head
so many to choose from
easier done then said

i want you
but then i dont
what i feel for you is hard to cope
a lot or a little or is there no hope

you say you don't like me
but you give me clues that you do
i am sorry you that you dont have the
guts to say I LIKE YOU!!!

things are starting to clear up
i kno me decision
and this is the end
you and me is my vision

now here is the hard part
let me tell you
what i have to say
cause if i dont i will have to pay

i like you and i like you a lot
i hope you like me too
because this is the truth
the next step is all you.

© Copyright 2009 sarah luna - All Rights Reserved

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2009-03-05 02:04 PM

Awe.
good first post.

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with you

2 posted 2009-03-05 02:31 PM

love that,
"the next step is all you"

that takes guts and is very brave of you to put your feelings out there like that. Good for you!!

Better to take that leap then to wonder for the rest of your life, "what if I would have just said"

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KandyGrl511
Member

since 2008-11-30

Posts 52
Michigan

3 posted 2009-03-05 08:30 PM

ok i really really loved this poem!!!!!!

<3 i love u<3

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2009-03-06 12:15 PM

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freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

5 posted 2009-03-06 08:40 PM

I really like this, especially the way you ended it.

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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