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Britt_Brat Junior Member
since 2008-03-05
Posts 37Knoxville, TN |
Walking down a darkened road waiting... Waiting till that moment when I can stop fighting... Fighting just to be a normal person in her eyes... In her eye I can't make a mistake... I'm not perfect and never will be... Perfection is not an option... Options for me are limited... limited freedoms with her... With her i have to beg... begging is for dogs... But I'm not a dog I'm a person... A person who has to fight... Fighting a mother... A mother stuck in the past.. Her past... And she blames me for all that went wrong in her life... cut and bleeding |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very sad...but it sounds as if you do wish to connect to your mother. Perhaps your minister, or a friend you may have in common, could help?  I'll keep you in my prayers. |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
It sounds like me and my mother. It sucks I know. I like the way you started each line with the last words in the preceding line. |
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