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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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Moonbeam, This is a song that I was singing. Kay? So its not gonna have its da,dums or its pattern. Just letting you know  But I think this poem is really cliché, you know? Oh well. Enjoy I'll wait for you at the door Be there to watch you soar To comfort you when it rains Hug you to erase the pain Time's got nothin' on me I love you, its plain to see Just hold on tight I'll kiss you under moonlight Always be there for you We'll make it through Stay with me love We'll fly away like turtle doves |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Okkkk, really really confusing. It's like you took parts out of random poems and just through them together. I couldn't get anything out of this for that reason. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I know it pretty much sucks. |
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