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Teen Poetry #9

A New Kind Of Thinking

Elias Nevermore
Member

since 2007-11-03

Posts 152

0 posted 2009-03-04 12:34 PM

There is a world beyond the pavement gray

where colors illuminate the pale shades
of light that hover over all our heads,

where moments are captured on paper sheets
sprayed in images that slowly fade away,

where frequencies and waves mesh together
forming music out of shallow spoken word,

where each thought written out of emotion
can inspire new life to thrive or decay,

This is a world that can and will be changed.

Reborn_Phoenix
Junior Member

since 2009-03-04

Posts 11

1 posted 2009-03-04 01:05 AM

Great poem, and it can be interpreted man ways.
Personally I think it represents the harmony of nature and science to create our way of life. Very interesting write.

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

2 posted 2009-03-06 08:53 AM

Hmm, it reminds me more of how no one can leave things to mystery now-a-days. Science alwayz interfers with enjoying the world. What did you intend for it to mean?

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