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Teen Poetry #9

As Long As We Get There

synthetic
Member

since 2006-06-10

Posts 70
ontario, canada

0 posted 2009-02-26 12:47 PM

This something borrowed something blue,
Will bring me down in front of you;
I'm promising to take you back,
To something to look forward to.

Starting, we contemplated ends,
Street corners where our knees would bend;
Praying to have our sins away,
By Heaven's showers angels send.

This back and forth is then and now,
It'll add up in the end somehow.
Tomorrow today, all the same

A masterpiece if we're the frame.
I mean, things do get out of hand;
Here's the bottom line, what stands out most is a success not planned.

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

1 posted 2009-02-27 08:33 AM

I liked the thoughts. I just found it a bit hard to follow so I had to reread it a few times.

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