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You sit inside my head
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You sit inside my head |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
This is just a vent, nothing much really. You sat inside my head for months and never said a word, Though you exposed a vibrant deep confusion down inside. I knew you loved me, still, I feel the words you haven’t heard, That love is not always enough with even tears we’ve cried. You wander endless thoughts of fear inside my shuddered mind. I plead and beg for you to leave, but you won’t fade away. I see then how much I would gravel now to change the signs. Would love prevail, and leave us near and close, or still in pain? You’re in the slowly beating songs I listen to at night. Among the words, I feel your touch and see your lustrous smile. You then escape for one second, not holding on so tight, And then I knew, I wanted to just hold you for a while. But we both know the gleaming waver of my tearful eyes We’ve felt the pain I’m known to cause, and may cause once again You wouldn’t take me back; you don’t deserve my awful lies And though you sit upon my every cell, we’ve found the end With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life. |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
"You’re in the slowly beating songs I listen to at night. Among the words, I feel your touch and see your lustrous smile." I liked these lines a lot. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I realy love the ending stanza. I know how that feels to be in a position like that. Hope your doing better hon. -Zach When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you. |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Thanks, guys, I'll feel better soon, I hope. With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life. |
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