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Goodnight & Goodbye
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Goodnight & Goodbye |
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Octave Member
since 2008-07-29
Posts 186Highlands, Scotland. |
Goodnight & Goodbye I now must say goodnight my friend, I’m afraid to your time has come You have lived a long and shining life All that can be has been done Just gently close your eyes my sweet And welcome long awaited sleep Please have no fear my dear There is no need to weep Don’t be scared, don’t be sad A better life will greet you soon Happiness with be your friend As you follow that sweet tune I’ll miss you more than possible So please don’t you do fret You’ll always stay inside me Not with pain nor with regret Your picture book of memories I know is mine to keep So please ignore my tears And sink down into sleep All I’ll say is I‘m sorry for Things that have not been said I promise I will repay you With pure peace instead I now must say goodnight my friend You and I now must part But don’t you worry my dear friend You’re always my heart. |
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Belinda Member
since 2006-01-30
Posts 126UK |
That's beautiful, a couple of things that could be altered but it sometimes helps to read it aloud before you post it because you notice things you don't when you are writing it. A very beautiful poem though. I'm sorry to hear about that. Don't be sorry for the things that were left unsaid, a true friend will know how important they are. Brilliant write. Belinda ~* Expect nothing, Prepare for anything. |
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