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Even Odd Is Even
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Even Odd Is Even |
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Octave Member
since 2008-07-29
Posts 186Highlands, Scotland. |
Even Odd Is Even Sometimes I think I’m crazy That my mind is inside out That no one understands me Don’t know what I’m about My pages are glued together My heart is hidden in my head I speak in full stops and numbers When I walk I fly instead I live in my own little spaceship With my own stars as my friends I sing out in even digits And sit on the latest trends Nothing must touch another Solitude is peace of mind Life is eaten by the slice And sings out from deep inside My hands are maps of past regrets My face acts out upon a stage No one sees my flighty thoughts Or my voice that hums such rage My arms are wrapped around myself Like an itch I can’t quite reach The panic that seems to threaten me Is swallowed down like bleach Sometimes I think I’m crazy That my mind is on its own But the curious thing is that maybe I don’t want to be alone. The funny thing is i think i like this poem. |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
"Sometimes I think I�m crazy That my mind is on its own But the curious thing is that maybe I don�t want to be alone." __________________________________________ This is really good. I especially liked the ending. But don't worry, nobody likes to be alone, and if we all stick together, no one has to be.  Great write. library {~~*~~} Emmalee Janelle |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Everyone is crazy just few are those who act upon it. I like your poem lots. lol -Zach When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I like your poem too. Alison |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
same here Boshii2 |
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