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silent tears... |
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Love_Skull Junior Member
since 2008-07-15
Posts 44 |
the same nightmare every night beatings from his father and he doesn't put up a fight it stays a secret remains unsaid every beating is a regret one missed day same as every week secret hidden away silence is not sweet comes back to school lifeless as ever broken arm, broken leg "dont worry, I'll get better." one person knows sworn to secrecy cant handle it any longer tired of this frequency cant tell anyone need to tell somebody told my cat she is my buddy go to school the next morning told him to tell someone he gives me a warning gotta keep my promise cant let anyone know have to tell someone he cant wait much longer i tell my mom she tells the cops she said it was the right thing to do he gratefully says thanks a lot by:leah stonis ____________________________________________________ this sadly happens to ppl in this world. some cases of physical abuse are much worse.plz comment! |
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JennJenn Junior Member
since 2009-02-18
Posts 20Canada |
I liked this poem, however I disliked that some stanzas have 3 lines and others have 4.  |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Its so sad that this really happens. I feel for the poeple that this happens to. Nice poem! With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life. |
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