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Eeyore7793
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since 2009-02-17
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0 posted 2009-02-17 08:46 PM


When you finally find a special someone
That makes your heart flutter and sing
It is the best feeling that could ever overcome you
But when that one is forbidden
Your heart is engulfed with trechory and sorrow
Yearning to confess to him the feelings you savor
But there are restraints that seem near to impossible to overcome
Restraints built up of confusion and fear
Having the one desire to be held by him
And be embraced in his loving arms
But the fear of rejection overwhelms you
So you remain where you stand
Admiring the one you long for from afar
Fading slowly into the distance
And your one wish is to stop him
To keep him by your side
But your apprehensive
Frightened of the consequences that might occur
That come with chasing after the one you love

[This message has been edited by Eeyore7793 (02-17-2009 09:38 PM).]

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rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
usa
1 posted 2009-02-17 11:56 PM


captured. i know this feeling. and it put it into precise perfect words.
good job!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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