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Love's Been Shed (really short)
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Love's Been Shed (really short) |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Another place and a different face Tears still rain from pure disgrace Hearts pulled apart by hatred Our love has now been shed No hope it’s all shattered Nothing else truly mattered Life has lost its meaning Andthe truth isn’t worth seeing |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Ahh! Little to say this poem was amazing! And I'm not just saying this. It really was good! Love it to bits and back.  Keep up the writing!! -Zach When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you. |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Ooh, i like this one! Good job! With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes less is indeed more. You captured it all. Well done! |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Thanks, I appreciate the comments. |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
really fast and short rhythm thats catchy...whats not to love about this one?? |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Well...LOL! I could think of many things people wouldn't like about this one. I won't though.  Thanks... |
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ForgottenWorks New Member
since 2009-01-31
Posts 6Kissimmee,FL |
Love this one! |
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nina1522 Member
since 2009-02-14
Posts 189 |
short and well not particuarly sweet so... short and great. loved this poem. VERY GOOD. |
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