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Teen Poetry #9

Tryin ta get warmed up

De Leon
New Member

since 2009-02-12

Posts 1

0 posted 2009-02-17 01:20 AM

This is my first so keeps the laughs to a minimum =)lemme no what u think

If someone were to ask me last year who you were,
Id have little to even say
Now i can fill a library with my thoughts i developed to today
Id write a book of poems if only to make you smile
Even now wanting to tell you i miss you after only a little while
And its strange how quickly these feelings developed within me,
From just seeing you as a friend to wanting to see you beside me.
It makes me happy.
Makes me smile now thinking of the poems you showed me.
I couldnt help but thinking i knew they were for me
Guess now we just wait and see where all this takes us and what the future has in store for you and me.

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

1 posted 2009-02-17 08:29 AM

Hmmm, the structure is off. Good ideas though. An alright first post.

GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

2 posted 2009-02-17 08:30 AM

Oh I almost forgot: Welcome to PIP!

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2009-02-17 10:42 AM

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ForgottenWorks
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since 2009-01-31

Posts 6
Kissimmee,FL

4 posted 2009-02-17 11:02 AM

Welcome to PIP!

nina1522
Member

since 2009-02-14

Posts 189

5 posted 2009-02-17 08:29 PM

hey im new too. WELCOME

nina1522
Member

since 2009-02-14

Posts 189

6 posted 2009-02-17 08:30 PM

i also just posted my first poem a couple of days ago. this is a great website to explore the different types of poetry. good job.

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

7 posted 2009-02-17 11:58 PM

awwww cute!!1 welcome to piptalk!
and u should tell her/him how u feel

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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