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Teen Poetry #9
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Octave
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since 2008-07-29
Posts 186
Highlands, Scotland.
0 posted 2009-02-14 02:09 PM

Happiness makes you do strange things and write crappy poetry but i dont care. (:

Pop

POP.
Happiness.
But I don’t deflate.
because
You keep me in that
Special place.
Whirlwind in my hair
Sunshine in my mouth.
Happiness.
POP.
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GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16
Posts 471
TN
1 posted 2009-02-15 10:46 AM

HaHaHa!! This reminds me of the things I come up with randomly. I really really enjoyed this. Plus, the inside thought was nice. It's sort of pretty in a whacky way.
freeand2sexy
Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
2 posted 2009-02-15 02:25 PM

The structure is pretty bad, but i actually like it a lot

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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