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GothicCherry
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0 posted 2009-02-12 07:35 PM



His response is hesitant
Impatience is building within me
I would cry but he would see
No need for that impairment

We are still wrapped as one for now
A few more seconds could change that
I guess I fell to hard to fast
Trembling at thoughts so foul

I’m not sure of his ideas or intentions
The pieces of my pre-broken heart sinking
In still waters they drown, and I quit singing
His answer will come soon to break the tension

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Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
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1 posted 2009-02-15 10:47 AM


wow real passion here. i loved it. amazing.

~ you cant run from yourself ~

GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16
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2 posted 2009-02-15 11:17 AM


Thanks!
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