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Too Broken To Pick Up The Pieces
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Too Broken To Pick Up The Pieces |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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 Forgive me darling. For I can't stop my tears flow Its not my fault for what I am. I thought you should know. I lost my way many times And I'm afraid to let anyone else in. My mind and heart are quarreling And this battle I can't win. Every second is pain Because I put my heart back together Every memory is a razor blade That lingers on cutting me forever. I keep silent from your words Because I don't know what to say. How can I trust your words anymore? Your promises never stayed... I guess I was only second best I wasn't good enough for you to stay I tried to fix myself up You just pushed me out of the way. Forgive me darling Because I'm too broken for you I love you darling Please know that's true.. [This message has been edited by Falling rain (01-31-2009 08:08 PM).] |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Holy poo on a stick! What is with you lately? all you can write is this freakin' amazing poetry while i've got this freaking-forever-lasting writers block! argh! ....phew..okay, im done now. But seriously...this is amazing. {~~*~~} Emmalee Janelle |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Omgah! I'm about to go crazy!! All of your poems lately are reminding me of how I've hurt guys in the past and now how I am probably fixing to pain yet another one...=[ I still love your poems though! && maybe reading of your heartbreak in such deep expressions will keep me from tearing at another's heart. Gosh, I'm such a mess now. |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
This is really good, Zach, this also reminds me of what i did to someone, everything you wrote seems to probably be what my ex was feeling. Nice poem! So you're not the only mess Michaela! With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life. |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Well, at least I'm not alone! Haha!! Zach, it seems as though us girls are extremely cruel beings... I'm sorry!  |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Okay first thing... Girls aren't cruel on purpose. If you knew that you were gonna do that to a guy then I'm sure you wouldn't do it. But that fact is that you didn't know and the guy might be better now. And thanks for reading my poems. Its really nice to know I have a few fans.  -Zach When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you. |
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nina1522 Member
since 2009-02-14
Posts 189 |
holy. ...if i could swear on this site i would. haha i cant believe how good this is everytime i click on a poem to read its by you. your really good. once agian another great poem |
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